2014년 11월 2일 일요일

Narration

My persuasive argument thesis is: Humans are not able to highly control their emotion.


1. What do people already know about my topic?

Everyone exactly knows that humans feel variety of emotions and react. Also they know that it affects to our mental and physical influence and that people try several methods to make their emotion better. People have experience of expressing their emotion unconsciously because of the suddenly triggered emotion. That's why some people feel confused of their actual emotion. Despite we always feel emotions, people don't exactly know about the definition and the process of emotion.  

2. What research has already been done about my topic?

http://www.wikihow.com/Express-Your-Feelings - Good source for knowing about the method and therapy to notice and ease human emotion.
http://www.mkprojects.com/pf_emotions.html - More specific details of human emotion such as the definition of emotion and feelings, the symptoms and effects of emotion and the way people accept it.
 http://www.google.co.kr/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=web&cd=5&ved=0CEoQFjAE&url=http%3A%2F%2Fdavidmatsumoto.com%2Fcontent%2FNG%2520Spain%2520Article_2_.pdf&ei=vE5LVJ7hC5D48QWN_oIw&usg=AFQjCNH38-3oxF2HlYMlRqcqaJwGvBCOTA&sig2=myWj6zH5NWeGR23OkmXZLA&cad=rjt
 - The deepen source about human emotion that emphasize the changing human emotion in history, and the nature, systems and factors for triggering emotion.  



3. What are the implications of my argument (What if I'm right? What if I'm right and people ignore me?)

Humans still feel emotion and response to it then express. Several inherent factors and systems play a role in feeling and regulating emotion. However, emotion can not be highly controlled by them because emotion occurs unconsciously. If people ignore me, they will confidently regard themselves as a mind controller though they will not be able to easily escape from their feeling of shock or bad condition. They will waste their time thinking and wondering about why their emotion goes like this and that. They will get more confused and rely on other things for a solution, not by themselves.          

My Narration

 Emotions affect our physical bodies and mental. In the MK projects,  people who just ignore and repress their emotions are setting themselves up for physical illness. Emotions that are felt but buried in the body can cause serious illness such as cancer, arthiritis, and other types of chronic illnesses. Emotions change how we feel, our thinking, and our behaviors. Our physical and mental conditions formed by the emotions differ in daily lives because our emotions are also different daily. That really means emotions control us without any difficulty and we are controlled by them unconsciously. Consider the opposite. People are affected by the emotions. Say "someone feels an emotion and want to change it exactly what he or she wants". People try various solutions to control their emotions. For example, they suppress our angerness and sadness not to express to others. After that they commonly feel so tired that we can do nothing except getting rest or sleep. This kind of symptoms breaks the balance of biorhythm and occur disease in our bodies. Emotions normally give several influences intactly on us without any guarantee while we have to sacrifice something like our bodies to deal with the emotions. The contra is not always true although the definition seems true. 

 
 Let's consider the different emotions in different situations of every people to look at some examples of people trying to freely confront to their emotions. Humans face lots of situations while surviving in the society. Each of them can feel different emotions and even express differently in the same situations. People aim not to easily show their emotions and aim to "control" them in their social groups. For example, suppose your boss always gives much pressure on you but you have to follow him well to get a better promotion. In this case, you might feel angry with him and move to another company because you couldn't overcome the situation. Or you might feel happy and accept that you are developing from this situation. These two emotions are common in this situation and other emotions might not appear. The latter can be a good method but it might be hard for people. That means people feel and express their emotions but they don't decide them. What they should feel is determined by their emotions. 

 The thought of people who call themselves "mind cotroller" and some psychologists made the error on normal people's thought of their emotions. Even the inventions to change the identified emotions are considered impossible to be made and the ability to quite freely control our minds is still seemed wizardly nowadays, people unconsciously consider "control" on their emotions as a realistic fact. If someone is about to experiment his conscious emotions, he or she will find nothing.  

 Humans' imagination of their change and their infinite control over themselves but this is mostly impossible and can lead to misunderstading of themselves in real life.      
    

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