1) What score do you think you deserve? Here is the rubric:
I think I deserve 1 point. Actually, I completed my first draft late because I tried to write as best as I can do.
2) What did you do well?
My organization is good and the elements are connected well.
3) What could you have done better?
I could have used the research better. I need to analyze the research more.
4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?
My confirmation contains various convincing explanations. Also I suggested good counter argument in my refutation and concession.
5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?
My narration is kind of weak because I need more examples.
6) What's your strategy to make your second draft better?
Acutally I couldn't find what I have to do for my better classical arugment essay because I posted my first draft very late and couldn't get the feedback....However, I'll try my best to find and make it better.
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