We human beings live with emotion like most living creatures do. We feel happy when things go well, sad when someone unexpectedly leaves us, angry when something annoys or bothers us and many kinds of emotion appear on ourselves. Some people may have wondered and thought about how these emotions come and affect us. After their consideration, most of them misunderstand that humans have the ability to create and change their emotion. Think about the situations that can be happened after our emotion - We would have a fight or an argument when we feel angry at someone, hug or kiss someone when we feel love, run away or confront against when we feel fear, cry when we are sad, and various situations occur naturally in accordance with variety of emotion. They can be happened because of our automatic emotion before we really notice it. We might think that emotion is able to be controlled by human because we feel it differently but actually humans are not able to highly control their emotion.
1. Attention grabber -
I tried to attract people with common emotion that everyone completely feels in daily life. Then, I mentioned what some people may have wondered about and showed their opinion that is misunderstood and suggest them to think about the situations.
2. Explains the topic -
I wrote some situations that the readers might think of while they are reading as an element to derive the topic. Also I mention the elements of my topic : automatic emotion, misunderstanded opinion, and the opposite of this opinion.
3. My thesis -
I first thought the argument that "Various situations can be occured by various human emotions." but it was broad, and not direct. Then I changed it to specific argument that "Humans are not controlling and not able to control their emotion" but it was not that simple and thought it should be more specific. Finally, I changed it to "Humans are not able to Highly control their emotion."
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